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Change: and in the section on pronoun reference, complete exercise one. For all sentences containing errors, write the correction. This exercise is online and interactive; however, you may choose to dowload the pdf version if you prefer. In either case, write your answers on a separate sheet of paper. Click on
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Change: Back to Week 5Faulty or Unclear Pronoun ReferenceA referent is a word or phrase that refers to something else (an antecedent). Problems with referents can cause confusion and, sometimes, unintended humor. Problems with references occur primarily (1) when sentences have more than
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Change: In either case, write your answers on a separate sheet of paper. Click on this link and in the section on pronoun reference, complete exercise one. For all sentncessentences containing errors, write the correction.
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Change: This exercise is online and interactive; however, you may choose to dowload the pdf version if you prefer. In either case, write your answers on a separate sheet of paper. Click on this link and in the section on pronoun reference, complete
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Change: Improved: The store that recently had the referent.big sale went bankrupt For Improved: instance,The herestore isthat had the anotherbig possiblesale went bankrupt recently. re-arranging the solutionmaterial to eliminate the referenceneed for problemthe above:referent. The possibility of a
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Change: The corporate officers had failed to disclose the serious conflict of interest raised by the possible bankruptcy of T&J's primary supplier. This was a disaster for theimplied. officers. [What was a disaster -- the failure to disclose, the conflict, or the possible bankruptcy?] Notice that the
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Change: The corporate officers had failed to disclose the serious conflicts of interest caused by their ownership of several of T&J's suppliers. The possibility of a bankruptcy was a disaster for them. [Was the possibility a disaster for the officers, T&J, or the suppliers?] Referring to an antecedent
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Change: Renamed from Strategy 3: References by Aug 30 2009, 8:20 PM EDT for: Rename
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